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da bro
Banned
Number of posts: 168
Age: 23
Registration date: 2007-02-18
 |  Subject: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:58 am | |
| Here's a poem I wrote that I also posted somewhere else.  I wrote other poems and written scary stories and other stories. Here's an example of my poem called A Lion and Me. Ask me if you want to hear my stories saved on the computer called The Serpant's Cave and The Evil Doll and my poems, The Insulting Poem, Food, Monkeys, and Invisible. A Lion and MeBy Zeleena(Lizelia) What I like most Is so mystical and mild. And that is the wonders. The wonders of the wild. To see those great beasts Roaming on the plain, Then if that Savanna is gone, Things won't be the same. How I love those lions And their warm soft fur. And it reminds me Of a beautiful cat purr. To think they're endangered It's so sad to see. If only I could meet one. A lion and me. Do you like it? Want to hear anything else? You know, you may request anything for me to write and poem/story about!  ~Lizelia |
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CPH~Admin
Admin
Number of posts: 148
Age: 16
Location: I am in front of my computer. :O
Registration date: 2007-02-18
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 9:53 pm | |
| Wow, very good! It's awesome!
~Admin |
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da bro
Banned
Number of posts: 168
Age: 23
Registration date: 2007-02-18
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:08 pm | |
| | CPH~Admin wrote: | Wow, very good! It's awesome!
~Admin |
Thank you! Would you loike to hear another? If so, which one?
~Liz |
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Soccergal14
Puffle
Number of posts: 49
Age: 18
Registration date: 2007-02-20
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Mon Feb 26, 2007 10:45 am | |
| Wow! That was amazing! Great job!!!! |
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da bro
Banned
Number of posts: 168
Age: 23
Registration date: 2007-02-18
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:48 pm | |
| | Soccergal14 wrote: | | Wow! That was amazing! Great job!!!! |
Thanks. Do you want to hear another?
~Liz |
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Soccergal14
Puffle
Number of posts: 49
Age: 18
Registration date: 2007-02-20
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:12 am | |
| Yes! Deffinetly!!! |
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da bro
Banned
Number of posts: 168
Age: 23
Registration date: 2007-02-18
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:35 am | |
| | Soccergal14 wrote: | | Yes! Deffinetly!!! |
OK... which one? Next time you pick, but here's one:
Monkeys
By Zeleena(Lizelia)
For Chelsea
When I step into the jungle
And look down to my feet,
And I saw something cute;
A monkey I had to meet.
The monkey said "Hi!"
And we swang from tree to tree.
If only he knew
How happy I could be.
I love that monkey
And cute, chubby face.
And only if
I could never leave this place!
~Liz |
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CPH~Admin
Admin
Number of posts: 148
Age: 16
Location: I am in front of my computer. :O
Registration date: 2007-02-18
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:46 am | |
| | Lyzly wrote: | | Soccergal14 wrote: | | Yes! Deffinetly!!! |
OK... which one? Next time you pick, but here's one:
Monkeys
By Zeleena(Lizelia)
For Chelsea
When I step into the jungle
And look down to my feet,
And I saw something cute;
A monkey I had to meet.
The monkey said "Hi!"
And we swang from tree to tree.
If only he knew
How happy I could be.
I love that monkey
And cute, chubby face.
And only if
I could never leave this place!
~Liz |
Keep adding more, these are WONDERFUL! |
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da bro
Banned
Number of posts: 168
Age: 23
Registration date: 2007-02-18
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:51 am | |
| Next time, tell me!!! Tell me which one you want to hear or which subject you request!!! Oh well, but here's another:
The Insulting Poem
By Zeleena(lizelia)
Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
I'm a smart human,
But what are you?
To express the sensation
You give me when I see
It's very clear
That you don't matter to me.
You can say I'm evil.
You can say I'm mean.
But you're so ugly
You not allowed be seen.
You're so stupid
And you were NEVER a star.
And everyone knows
That I'm better than you are!
~Liz |
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Soccergal14
Puffle
Number of posts: 49
Age: 18
Registration date: 2007-02-20
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 8:26 am | |
| Haha! That one was especially good  !  How bout the topic soccer  ~Scceral14 |
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da bro
Banned
Number of posts: 168
Age: 23
Registration date: 2007-02-18
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Soccergal14
Puffle
Number of posts: 49
Age: 18
Registration date: 2007-02-20
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:36 am | |
| Oh my gosh That was great! Thanks so much!!  ~Sccergal14 |
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CPH~Admin
Admin
Number of posts: 148
Age: 16
Location: I am in front of my computer. :O
Registration date: 2007-02-18
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:41 am | |
| You know what? You've given me the idea of adding a Poetry Forum, Lyzly. And you could Moderate it, just you! You've given me a GREAT idea! But, of course, me and rebel will have to discuss it, and the users would have to approve of it.
~Admin |
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da bro
Banned
Number of posts: 168
Age: 23
Registration date: 2007-02-18
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:49 am | |
| Cool, thanks! Or I could just open a Poetry shop, lol. Or writing. I can write stories but they take longer! So... which kind of poem/ story do you want to hear now? You may request a story but it will take awhile, though... I'm sorta good at scary stories and fiction. ~Liz |
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CPH~Admin
Admin
Number of posts: 148
Age: 16
Location: I am in front of my computer. :O
Registration date: 2007-02-18
| | Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:53 am | |
| Hmm...What about one about a puffle and a penguin? |
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