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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:58 am | |
| Here's a poem I wrote that I also posted somewhere else. I wrote other poems and written scary stories and other stories. Here's an example of my poem called A Lion and Me. Ask me if you want to hear my stories saved on the computer called The Serpant's Cave and The Evil Doll and my poems, The Insulting Poem, Food, Monkeys, and Invisible. A Lion and MeBy Zeleena(Lizelia) What I like most Is so mystical and mild. And that is the wonders. The wonders of the wild. To see those great beasts Roaming on the plain, Then if that Savanna is gone, Things won't be the same. How I love those lions And their warm soft fur. And it reminds me Of a beautiful cat purr. To think they're endangered It's so sad to see. If only I could meet one. A lion and me. Do you like it? Want to hear anything else? You know, you may request anything for me to write and poem/story about! ~Lizelia | |
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CPH~Admin Admin
Number of posts : 148 Age : 29 Location : I am in front of my computer. :O Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 9:53 pm | |
| Wow, very good! It's awesome!
~Admin | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:08 pm | |
| - CPH~Admin wrote:
- Wow, very good! It's awesome!
~Admin Thank you! Would you loike to hear another? If so, which one? ~Liz | |
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Soccergal14 Puffle
Number of posts : 49 Age : 31 Registration date : 2007-02-20
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Mon Feb 26, 2007 10:45 am | |
| Wow! That was amazing! Great job!!!! | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:48 pm | |
| - Soccergal14 wrote:
- Wow! That was amazing! Great job!!!!
Thanks. Do you want to hear another? ~Liz | |
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Soccergal14 Puffle
Number of posts : 49 Age : 31 Registration date : 2007-02-20
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:12 am | |
| Yes! Deffinetly!!! | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:35 am | |
| - Soccergal14 wrote:
- Yes! Deffinetly!!!
OK... which one? Next time you pick, but here's one: Monkeys By Zeleena(Lizelia) For Chelsea When I step into the jungle And look down to my feet, And I saw something cute; A monkey I had to meet. The monkey said "Hi!" And we swang from tree to tree. If only he knew How happy I could be. I love that monkey And cute, chubby face. And only if I could never leave this place! ~Liz | |
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CPH~Admin Admin
Number of posts : 148 Age : 29 Location : I am in front of my computer. :O Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:46 am | |
| - Lyzly wrote:
- Soccergal14 wrote:
- Yes! Deffinetly!!!
OK... which one? Next time you pick, but here's one:
Monkeys By Zeleena(Lizelia) For Chelsea
When I step into the jungle And look down to my feet, And I saw something cute; A monkey I had to meet.
The monkey said "Hi!" And we swang from tree to tree. If only he knew How happy I could be.
I love that monkey And cute, chubby face. And only if I could never leave this place!
~Liz Keep adding more, these are WONDERFUL! | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 4:51 am | |
| Next time, tell me!!! Tell me which one you want to hear or which subject you request!!! Oh well, but here's another:
The Insulting Poem
By Zeleena(lizelia)
Roses are red, Violets are blue. I'm a smart human, But what are you?
To express the sensation You give me when I see It's very clear That you don't matter to me.
You can say I'm evil. You can say I'm mean. But you're so ugly You not allowed be seen.
You're so stupid And you were NEVER a star. And everyone knows That I'm better than you are!
~Liz | |
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Soccergal14 Puffle
Number of posts : 49 Age : 31 Registration date : 2007-02-20
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 8:26 am | |
| Haha! That one was especially good ! How bout the topic soccer ~Scceral14 | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:33 am | |
| - Soccergal14 wrote:
- Haha! That one was especially good !
How bout the topic soccer
~Scceral14 Hmm... soccer... well, I'm not a soccer fan, so I'm sorry if it's short. I could try it again later sometime, but here it is: Soccer By Zeleena(Lizelia) For Soccergal14 The best thing ever That's better than school, b-ball or a locker Is my favorite sport And that is soccer. I rule at soccer. No one can beat me. I'm the soccer VIP And that's how they treat me. Score the goals And kick the ball back and forth. I rule at soccer Cause that's the best sport, of course! ~Liz | |
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Soccergal14 Puffle
Number of posts : 49 Age : 31 Registration date : 2007-02-20
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:36 am | |
| Oh my gosh That was great! Thanks so much!! ~Sccergal14 | |
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CPH~Admin Admin
Number of posts : 148 Age : 29 Location : I am in front of my computer. :O Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:41 am | |
| You know what? You've given me the idea of adding a Poetry Forum, Lyzly. And you could Moderate it, just you! You've given me a GREAT idea! But, of course, me and rebel will have to discuss it, and the users would have to approve of it.
~Admin | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:49 am | |
| Cool, thanks! Or I could just open a Poetry shop, lol. Or writing. I can write stories but they take longer! So... which kind of poem/ story do you want to hear now? You may request a story but it will take awhile, though... I'm sorta good at scary stories and fiction. ~Liz | |
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CPH~Admin Admin
Number of posts : 148 Age : 29 Location : I am in front of my computer. :O Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 9:53 am | |
| Hmm...What about one about a puffle and a penguin? | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:01 am | |
| - CPH~Admin wrote:
- Hmm...What about one about a puffle and a penguin?
OK, I'll sleep on it cause I gotta go. Good night! Edit: Here it is: The Penguin and the Puffle By Zeleena(Lizelia) The penguin's cute pet Was just a baby puffle. He was spft and cuddley And his name was Fluffle! How the penguin loved his puffle And the puffle loved him back. But it was the worst time of all When the puffle had to pack. Fluffle was wanted to be adopted By some other owner. But his old owner, indeed, Was now a loner. Years went by And the puffle returned. The penguin and puffle were happy, And they needed each other, they learned. ~Liz | |
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Soccergal14 Puffle
Number of posts : 49 Age : 31 Registration date : 2007-02-20
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:49 am | |
| Aww! Lol That was so cute! | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Wed Feb 28, 2007 5:24 am | |
| - Soccergal14 wrote:
- Aww! Lol That was so cute!
Thanks, what subject do you want to hear about now? ~Liz | |
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CPH~Admin Admin
Number of posts : 148 Age : 29 Location : I am in front of my computer. :O Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Wed Feb 28, 2007 7:11 am | |
| I almost cried I loved it! Hmm...Let's see...One about..This forum? Lol
~Admin | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Wed Feb 28, 2007 8:24 am | |
| - CPH~Admin wrote:
- I almost cried I loved it! Hmm...Let's see...One about..This forum? Lol
~Admin Here it is! Maybe you could advirtise using my poem, lol! Well you could, it's just a thought. If you did, remember to say "By Zeleena" or "By Lizelia" or something. Just give me credit, lol. I tried somewhat of my best... Club Penguin Hints By Zeleena(Lizelia) Club Penguin Hints Is the best site of all. It's better than swimming, drawing, and hiking Or cruising at the mall. It's the place where you'll get The information you need. Register today And you will see! Come down for some hints. It's the best site you'll ever visit! Just remember- Clubpenguinhints.niceboard.com! It's a great site, isn't it? ~Liz | |
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CPH~Admin Admin
Number of posts : 148 Age : 29 Location : I am in front of my computer. :O Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:55 am | |
| Wow, that's pretty good! You should get a job as this! | |
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da bro Banned
Number of posts : 168 Age : 35 Registration date : 2007-02-18
| Subject: Re: A Lion Poem Thu Mar 01, 2007 7:36 am | |
| - CPH~Admin wrote:
- Wow, that's pretty good! You should get a job as this!
Well, maybe someday I could get them published. Why not PM rebel dancer about the Writing forum idea? ~Liz | |
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ilovesasuke Top-Star Poster
Number of posts : 413 Age : 27 Location : In WindClan territory! Registration date : 2007-11-17
| Subject: A Lion Poem Thu Feb 07, 2008 7:20 am | |
| Woah those were really good!!!!!!! Wanna hear a poem I wrote? Here it is. I Saw A Monster By ilovesasuke I saw a big monster under my bed It's long arm reached out and whacked my head It came out and knocked on my door It took one look at my clothes and said "You must be poor." Then it left a little "present" on my floor! The present was a pile of turds! LOL
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ilovesasuke Top-Star Poster
Number of posts : 413 Age : 27 Location : In WindClan territory! Registration date : 2007-11-17
| Subject: Poems Sat Feb 09, 2008 4:55 am | |
| Cake by ilovesasuke Oh do I love to bake, a delicious chocolate cake. I'll take a big bite, and it will taste so right, oh it'll be a delight. | |
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ilovesasuke Top-Star Poster
Number of posts : 413 Age : 27 Location : In WindClan territory! Registration date : 2007-11-17
| Subject: Poems Sat Feb 09, 2008 4:56 am | |
| Pie by ilovesasuke Occasionally I'll try to bake a pumpkin pie, Though it doesn't always turn out right. I'll take a big bite, and I'll scream with fright, and I'll also turn all white. | |
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